Friday, January 29, 2010

Prepositional Phrase

Through the darkness, In between and beyond the rocky crevices, with in my state of mind, contemplation starts to set in, under the rocky spikes dripping with water droplets free falling on top of a slick and ocean like surface of memories and thoughts, as soon as a new thought appears and forms, off a tall rigid cliff it falls in to the oceans' surface and then, slowly sinks beneath to add to all the other floating ghostly constant thoughts and raises the water, with each new thought that continues to fill the inner solitudes of my mind, until my head explodes with insanity.



1 comment:

Swanson said...

That is one very long and complicated sentence. You've got some great descriptive phrases but you need to break this into sentences.